Tuesday, 14 July 2020

A Salute To Our Indian Army



You are in a team,

With the same dream.

You respect our country,

Neglect your comforts,

And suspect the criminals.

You act as a hedge,

By saying our country’s pledge.

India as a car,

You are the wheels to make that move.

You suffer torture,

For India’s bright future.

The whole day you creep,

By sacrificing your sleep.

You are the perfect nail

to nail our country’s beauty.


AlaguLakshmi.S

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16 comments:

  1. Anonymous15 July 2020 at 10:37

    Nice poem. You have captured the patriotic feel in it. Keep writing more.

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  2. Anonymous15 July 2020 at 11:31

    Wow alagu, it's a good start for ur dreams to come true.your patriotism towards our country is awesome.you have a long way to go child.keep going with this spirit.God bls

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  3. Aiswarya15 July 2020 at 12:25

    Well written poem with meaningful words good go alagu keep rocking

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  4. Unknown15 July 2020 at 20:26

    Nice dear. Alagu keep rocking 🙂

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  5. Alagulakshmi15 July 2020 at 21:12

    Thank you all!

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  6. Unknown15 July 2020 at 21:57

    Your poem is a true depiction of dedication, shown by our warriors, crossing all the barriers.The essence is felt and the sacrifice of our army men makes our hearts melt.
    Keep rocking Alagu.

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  7. Vinaha16 July 2020 at 04:30

    Couldn't come up with better words to praise your poem... You did a great job. Keep doing. Waiting for your future works:-)

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  8. Unknown16 July 2020 at 13:36

    Nice poem...

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  9. anitha16 July 2020 at 19:00

    Good one Dear, Keep going

    - Ms.Anitha

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    1. Mallika Arulraj16 July 2020 at 19:57

      Thank you for your comment mam

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    2. Unknown16 July 2020 at 21:48

      Thank you so much, keep supporting.

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    3. Unknown16 July 2020 at 21:50

      Thank you for your comment man, keep supporting.

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  10. Tina16 July 2020 at 19:49

    Very patriotic! Keep going and all the best!

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