Sleepless nights, all by your side,
My blushing face that I try to hide.
Strolling with you, hand in hand,
Glimpsed only beautiful terrains in place of barren land.
Messy hair and untamed beard,
Remind me that my tastes are weird.
Warrior chests and your peevish smile,
Lost in meandering for you, another mile.
Your gleaming eyes never left mine,
Your absence makes me whine.
Your euphonious voice, I can hear you talking all day long,
Melts my anger, even if I'm not wrong.
My puerile attitude, difficult for anyone to bear,
Fortunately, you loved me for it, I swear.
Seeking forth your dark eyes,
Makes me go weak by knees.
Your modesty makes any girl crave,
I warn them, I'll dig them a grave.
The nonchalant glance you throw upon me,
Brings never-ending bright curves etching from me.
Your handsomeness is deeply catastrophic,
Makes me forget myself whenever I see you.
The shyness and timidity mask which I wore till now,
Is torn apart by your love.
Sentence me a lifetime of imprisonment in your heart,
Together let's make this life an art.
Wishing to be a refugee in your arms,
And left for eternity enchanted by your charms.
Beautiful lines from a beautiful person. Consider this as beginning, achieve big soon.
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