How does
this world work?
Oh, pretty
bird, who flies so far,
Is this
world truly bizarre?
I’m breaking
down and shaking around
In this
world so helplessly.
But your
kindness just grins
Completely
blind within.
I’m standing
alone in this world
That keeps
on changing,
And my true
self is fading.
Shocked by
how I am changed and remain paralyzed,
Until I have
the chance to find my own paradise.
So, please
remember me,
Oh, pretty
bird, and please tell me
If the
bizarre world is part of me?
-Jeril.P
Wow that poem is deep
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DeleteNice poem :v
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DeleteAwesome brother
ReplyDeleteHeartwelming lines dear ��
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ReplyDeleteOh, pretty bird, who didn't get to read this beautiful poem,
ReplyDeleteTell this person that they made a masterpiece.
World may or may not be bizarre,
But this person surely has a magical way with words!!
Keep writing! All the very best :-)
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